In my dreams. The sun shines into the eyes I wake up. And found himself in the garden is not huge I look around the circle, but I have many colorful flowers all over Variety of butterflies flying around me. I get up and walk indefinitely. And found an old wooden bridge across the river for a long turbulent slope When to walk across the bridge suddenly I found a small cottage behind. Home cottage is a table that provides food to many people waiting to eat.But the water in a glass of elegant beauty to empty I walk through the door. I hesitate to open the door. Because I worry about what is behind that door. When I opened the door suddenly disappeared all concerned.I see everyone singing and dancing together happily. I can not fail to attend. After all tired from dancing We walked out through the old wooden bridge. Everyone I looked down to the river bridge. Find it much more calm and clear. Suddenly, everyone jumps.!!
1. What do you like most about the composition? Choose the most interesting idea and explain why.
ตอบลบ>>I like her garden,it has very butterflies around.Because it's very nice dream and it's equation to be her dream.
2. In your own words, what is the main idea of the paragraph?
>>The garden in her dream look like in the fairy tales.In her dream she appreciates the beauty and enjoin of it
3. Which part(s) should be developed more? why? and how to improve it?
>>In the first line,you should repair it to "And found myself in the garden is not huge I look around it."
4. Any grammatical mistakes have been found? If yes, please identify 3 outstanding errors and give suggestions.
>>You should repair the present verbs to the past verb.That's all.Because your dream is in the past. ^^
1. What do you like most about the composition? Choose the most interesting idea and explain why.
ตอบลบ-I like ''Everyone I looked down to the river bridge. Find it much more calm and clear. Suddenly, everyone jumps.!!''because It seems exciting.
2. In your own words, what is the main idea of the paragraph?
-In my dream I walk in the garden.
3. Which part(s) should be developed more? why? and how to improve it?
-At line 1,Do you mean that himself ?
4.Any grammatical mistakes have been found? If yes, please identify 3 outstanding errors and give suggestions.
-You should repair ''wake up'' change to ''woke up'' and some vocab is present verb change to past verb.
1. What do you like most about the composition? Choose the most interesting idea and explain why.
ตอบลบ>> "I see everyone singing and dancing together happily." because it's time to fun.
2. In your own words, what is the main idea of the paragraph?
>> "I see the funny party behind the door."
3. Which part(s) should be developed more? why? and how to improve it?
>> "And found himself" in line 1 should be "And found myself".
4. Any grammatical mistakes have been found? If yes, please identify 3 outstanding errors and give suggestions.
>> Some verbs should repair to past simple because your dream is in the past.