,,*1. What do you like most about the composition? Choose the most interesting idea and explain why.
I like that sentence “my family and I visited my grandmother's house in Samutsongkarn on Songkarn Festival” Because today most people tend to focus on swimming for fun rather than think of to meet with relatives.
I like that sentence “my family and I visited my grandmother's house in Samutsongkarn on Songkarn Festival” Because today most people tend to focus on swimming for fun rather than think of to meet with relatives.
,,*2. In your own words, state the focus/thesis/topic of the paragraph.
I think it is a sentence that “splash water to people who walked along the street” Because it is the expression of the Songkran festival most Everyone walking on the street will be wet. And it makes me feel and want to enjoy Songkran soon.
,,*3. Which part(s) should be developed more? why? and how to improve it?
In that sentence “we gave food to monks” Should be “we Offered goods to monks” And should be written in the traditional Songkran festival in the temple with a pagoda like building sand etc.
,,*4. Write short, specific comments to the writer about how his/her writing can be improve.
Write a story in the holiday experience well. The story of a step does not beat about the bush. The reader understands the story and the imagination of the story read.
,,*5. Any grammatical mistakes have been found? If yes, please identify those outstanding errors and give suggestions.
I am not sure. But think it is a sentence that “buy water guns and Thai perfumes” Is probable “bought water guns and Thai perfumes ” Because this is all past.
Content = 3
Organization = 3
Vocabulary = 3
Grammar = 2
Spelling and mechanics = 3
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