วันเสาร์ที่ 28 สิงหาคม พ.ศ. 2553
Writing Assignment 3 : A Memorable Event
My trip to Lampang. I went with my friends. My friends drive itself. Leave home at eight o'clock. Everyone is thrilled to see to see it with my own.My trip to Lampang. I went with my friends. My friends drive itself. Leave home at eight o'clock. Everyone is thrilled to see to see it with my own. On the go,We visit the same respect to Nakhon Sawan. A temple on the mountain. My friend who drives car number and climbing up to the temple. Everyone gathered in a different car yell We respect the temple together and walk in laundry room. I remember very hot. But I remember name a temple.Everyone gathered in a different car yell We respect the temple together and walk in laundry room. I remember very hot. But I remember name a temple.We stop to eat ice cream together at the temple. It tastes like it in Bangkok. I had a chance to measure it very clean bathrooms. To respect the same as encouraging for this trip better for everyone. Then we went out together to travel. After tiring of the travel Finally, we are to Lampang It takes approximately 10 hours until arrival. We stay together at a friend's house. Enough to house everyone together in a circle drinking immediately. Lampang very cold weather.
Tomorrow,We go to visit "Phra That Lampang Luang". It's beautiful to see and know the identity of Thailand. I have the opportunity to ride horses around the relics. It is not like I thought. Then we went to Waterfall "Chae Son".it has very little water. But cold and very clear.We returned home in days later.All together very tired. But a lot of fun as well.
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1. What do you like most about the composition? Choose the most interesting idea and explain why.
ตอบลบ>>I like about ice-cream at lamprang ,It tastes like it in Bangkok.You wouldn't to think it.Just kidding lol.
2. In your own words, what is the main idea of the paragraph?
>>She and her friends drive to Lamprang byself for sacred Phra That Lampang.
3. Which part(s) should be developed more? why? and how to improve it?
>>On the first of your paragraph's hardy to understand because it's meander.You should check before post it.
4. Any grammatical mistakes have been found? If yes, please identify 3 outstanding errors and give suggestions.
>>line 16:You should repair it to "when we arrive the house ,everybody go to sit circle for drinking." and some verbs isn't past verbs,you should repair it.
1. What do you like most about the composition? Choose the most interesting idea and explain why.
ตอบลบ-I like you go to Phra That Lampang Luang" because it is beautiful and
I want to go there.
2. In your own words, what is the main idea of the paragraph?
-She and her friends to see Phra That Lampang Luang and travel around under way.
3. Which part(s) should be developed more? why? and how to improve it?
- On first paragraph in line 1-5 is ambiguous . You should delete some sentence.
4. Any grammatical mistakes have been found? If yes, please identify 3 outstanding errors and give suggestions.
- Grammatical is O.k..I read understand but it have some vocab is change to past verbs.
1. What do you like most about the composition? Choose the most interesting idea and explain why.
ตอบลบ>> "We go to visit Phra That Lampang Luang" because it's beautiful place.
2. In your own words, what is the main idea of the paragraph?
>> I went to Lampang with my friends by our car.
3. Which part(s) should be developed more? why? and how to improve it?
>> This paragraph is difficult to understand. You should check it before post.
4. Any grammatical mistakes have been found? If yes, please identify 3 outstanding errors and give suggestions.
>> In line 16 "When we arrive the house ,everybody go to sit in a circle for drinking." and some verbs isn't the past verbs. You should check it.